This document is an acquaintance’s edited Upwork profile. My changes are in red, with an explanation of each in parentheses.
Mechanical Engineer, Designer, 3D Printer
Mmechanical (un-capitalize) Ddesign (un-capitalize) Eengineer (un-capitalize) , and (remove comma, add “and” for grammar) 3D CAD Mmodeler (un-capitalize) , (remove comma) with a keen understanding of product design and manufacturing. Readily grasps (add s) technical concepts and designs, providing customers with a clear details vision (changed for clarity) of their project. Great communication s (remove s) skills, (add comma) which facilitate the design process. Provides (add s) services in all aspects of product design, from including physical properties, to product testing, solid modeling, to and prototyping. (add period) My professional experience as a contractor, design and fabrication of bulk material handling conveyor systems, oil and gas pipeline inspections/focusing on function and safety, medical product design and manufacturing, brings substantial diversity of skills to any project big or small. Has a diverse skill set born from his experience in a variety of fields, including: contracting, the design and fabrication of bulk material handling conveyor systems, oil and gas pipeline inspections with a focus on function and safety, and medical product design and manufacturing. Looking I look forward to the opportunity to work with you.